Comments : Love at a distance

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Awwww....this is a really cute poem. Just some thoughts:

    "A kiss of your lips will b a dream come true,"

    "b" should be "be".

    "I'm looking to wards the future and forgetting
    the past."

    "to wards" should be "towards"

    But otherwise, this was very sweet and heartfelt. Keep writing, always and forever...