Tattoo

by BreakMyWingsAndRun   Aug 5, 2008


I want a tattoo,
thats not possible to be removed.

I want to write your name,
burn it in my skin with a flame.

I'll never forget its there,
I'll place it on my heart so it gets extra care.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie

    MmKay. Here we go.

    "I want a tattoo,
    thats not possible to be removed.

    I want to write your name,
    burn it in my skin with a flame.

    I'll never forget its there,
    I'll place it on my heart so it gets extra care."

    This is what I would do...

    "I want to adorn myself with a tattoo,
    one that cannot ever be removed.

    I want to write your gracious name;
    I want to burn it in my skin with our flame.

    I'll never forget that it lingers there,
    and I'll place it in my heart with extra care."

    That's what I would do. (: But you don't have do. Nicely done huni.

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    Take care,
    Stephanie.