MmKay. Here we go.

"I want a tattoo,
thats not possible to be removed.

I want to write your name,
burn it in my skin with a flame.

I'll never forget its there,
I'll place it on my heart so it gets extra care."

This is what I would do...

"I want to adorn myself with a tattoo,
one that cannot ever be removed.

I want to write your gracious name;
I want to burn it in my skin with our flame.

I'll never forget that it lingers there,
and I'll place it in my heart with extra care."

That's what I would do. (: But you don't have do. Nicely done huni.

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Take care,
Stephanie.