Another Night

by BreakMyWingsAndRun   Aug 5, 2008


Another night my phone didn't ring,
another night my heart didn't sing.

Another night that time passed by,
without you by my side.

Another night you didn't care,
giving my heart too much to bear.

You push me to the side,
like my feelings can always hide.

But they cant and they wont,
and they'll always love you even if you don't.

This will never be to your knowledge,
so all these feelings i will have to abolish.

So how can you love something as horrible as me,
when you have her for all eternity.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This is an emotional plea that is so romantic
    very nice rhyme scheme

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie

    "Another night that time passed by,
    without you by my side."
    -- The second line broke up the flow a little bit, so I'd say "without you stading by my side"

    "But they cant and they wont,
    and they'll always love you even if you don't."
    -- I'll be honest and say that I can definitely relate to this. :|

    "So how can you love something as horrible as me,
    when you have her for all eternity."
    -- Nice ending. It tied up the poem perfectly.

    5.5
    Take care,
    Stephanie.

  • 16 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    Loved it soo much!!! this poem is awesome!! it flowed perfectly and the way you worded it was great! Keep up the great work. I wish my poems were as good as this. i give this poem a 5/5 easily.

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