Title: Good job. It's interesting. It's intriguing and captures my attention. Like you said.. one of these is fire [this one] & the other is ice. Very nice idea!

Okay, I begin reading and I want a rhyme for some reason. I think that it would work better with the poem and help with the flow a lot. But your words are so amazing and full of imagery.

Overall, amazing write. It contained wonderful words that had great imagery as well. No flaws in this one.
Advice: Maybe put a rhyme to this poem? It would help with the flow.

5/5