Title: Amazing! Caught my attention yet again.

Great write. It was interesting...yet again. I love how in the first line of the poem you said shards of ice.. that was a wonderful word to use. Uhmm, vocabulary is good. But, yet again I would like a rhyme with this poem! I think if you added a rhyme the flow would be better. Other than that, you did a fabulous job!! 5/5

Very imaginative, i totally agree with leap of faith this poem is excellent. Your wording is very good and i was kept interested throughout.
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