Uncontrolled Feelings.

by Courageous Dreamer   Aug 5, 2008


``This is basically prose, sorry.

My feelings for you are uncontrollable,
there's nothing that can be done to alter them.
Each day they become more intense than the day before,
making me wonder when they will come to a halt.

I'm drowning in my own feelings and emotions,
as they are all I feel at the moment.
I continue to fall for you harder and deeper,
hoping and pleading that you catch me.

Please don't let these feelings dissolve darling.
For they are factual and spoken from my heart.
Your name is permanently stuck in my mind everyday,
as I hold the thought of you close to me.

So please catch me. I am waiting.

Oh, how I wish these feelings were controlled.
But they aren't - so I will proceed to fall for you.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    This poem is beautiful ^^
    Nice job, Ive' read this poem through twice =] not all poems have to rhyme, your flow was excellent.

  • 16 years ago

    by InvisiblyHeartless

    I read things like this a lot. For a common topic it's a well written piece.
    I think that the words could be better issued. If its a common thing, it needs something to make it stand out. You used a typical vocabulary. Words need to jump off the screen. Poetry and writing are beauty, so paint a masterpiece. You didn't portray that kind of emotion and imagery here. At the beginning you are strong, and sure. Towards the end the strength begins to dwindle. It fades out. It makes the ending seem weak, like the writer got tired. I think that if you made this tell a story, it would be much better. And if you added life to the words, it would become beautiful.
    I'm sorry, but this wasn't the greatest.
    I did like it, though.
    4/5
    Lexie

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