I agree with Miss Take

very short but a piece of wisdom indeed

A single verse, A perfect poem, A healing touch, A simple cure. The perfect example of poetry in motion. 5/5...Jim

Still with very little words, Ingrid, this write is beautiful. Amazing, isn't it? How so little can say so much. :)

Thank you for posting your beautiful poetry.. please don't stop. :)
God bless!

Take care!

Bri~

^With each stroke
of the pen
internal chaos
diminishes
and patterns
become visible^

You have made 6 lines out of one sentence. It is all fragmented...the flow is non-existent..

That sounded wise!!

Great things come in small packages. This tiny piece just absolutely shines. Well done!

Wow! this is really strong!

Ingrid,

you have hit the proverbial nail on the head. I believe if I was given this topic to write about, I would have stumbled for sure and elaborated too much. You have elloquently described how a poet decodes the world's nunaces and remold them into a multi spectrum of colours, smells, sounds and more besides :)

Through the haze we see the light.

Thank you

Michael

Simplicity was very present
but the meaning was so fit!
Great poem Mam Ingrid!
this one really deserves its
5.0 rating!
I'm looking forward for
some of your new posts!

Keep it up mam!

Wow. That is totally how I feel when I write. It's like with evry word the anger or saddness slowly fades away. Short and sweet. My kind of poem. nicley writen, KM

Short and very sweet.really well put.great poem!!!

I think this was probably the truest of all poems, they are my salvation and my life vest for sanity. Well said

This is one of the best poems in recent times. So much has been explained by a usage of just a few words. The best part i like was that the mind experiences internal chaos while writing this poem. I agree to it. This poem reminds me of my poem Haven 1, 2 and 3. I m relieved that somebody else too thinks the same way I do.

Waw you say it all with a few lines. You are so talented, each time i red your poems it makes me wanna write because of the message you convey.
keep on writing my dear poet.

Short...Ha,ha,haaa!!!
BUT WELL WRITTEN!!! ;)

There is just so much of beauty in these words even though it is short but so beautiful in every way. I want to to thank you for all your support and guidance through all my difficult times.

Despite the sorrows and suffering I go through each moment, I find it most intriguing and profoundly beautiful to wallow in the pleasure of knowing that somewhere, someone who cares for me so deeply is there. Just somewhere I can feel so closed to.

I know it is at times like these, that you find it difficult to be strong. But never let these troubles break your strife because you have endured so much and nothing can be so bad that it could stop you from being the Angel you are!

Take care...

Deep content proving that many times less is best. Loved it.

Bravo, Excellent!!!

Interesting poem Ingrid, and i guess its true a lot of the time as well.
Well done

Grant

Very true. sound like u write with ur hold heart in ur poems.