This was a very lovely write. very hertfelt and pure. i can honestly tell you said what was going through yer mind and what on in yer heart, what a beautiful thing. i loved poem, job well done. 5/5.

-Ashlei.

A really great piece of a broken love, its really sad piece and filled w/ loneliness and emotional feelings, the words are truly deep and very well express. i love those thoughts it was truly marvelous work,, keep on writing all what u feel.. 5/5

Wow, i definitly know what thats like. lost love is a real pain

Amazing.
The only word to describe it.
A great piece of writing and a great read.

Pure amazing.

5/5 :)

Superb write 10/5