Form, Fade, and Die

by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden   Aug 6, 2008


Cannibalistic clouds morph into one
all before the rising and setting sun.
The colors change and the clouds tatter,
but it's the same sky no matter.

The blue fades to a black sheet
accompanied by the stars we greet.
The clouds encompass the moon's light
as it shifts to a sunny day from night.

Clouds outlined by shades of gold and red
slowly turning to a dull gray so dead.
The sky roars as lightning flashes.
Into the ground each drop crashes.

The storm ends it's deadly fight
as we say goodbye to the night.
The sun returns to lighten the sky
as clouds form, fade, and die.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Beautiful transtition from day to night to storm and then back to day ... wonderful word choice... the beauty of nature is well captured... imagery is wonderful...

    The first two paragraphs are very powerful... I found the third para a little off...
    maybe because the syllable is uneven...
    overall a beautiful write...

    keep writing..

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Jennifer,

    a wonderfully beautiful description of a nights storm. Its build up, climax and as your title states, dies.

    Your poetry always flows so well that it's almost musical. The words are more than words, they are lyrics, a song about the rising and falling of a night's storm.

    Great work.

    Michael

  • 16 years ago

    by Travis

    Wowsers
    this is amazing jen jen
    i love how you made the reader imagine the picture
    not just read it
    very discriptive too
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Woah. This poem contained so much imagery and so many unique, great, words.. that contained a lot of description. I could definatly picture this storm that rolled through very perfectly! Wooot. <33 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    Wow Jen loved it! The imagery was just amazing and the words you used to describe everything painted such a nice picture in my mind. It all flowed flawlessly. Well done *5/5*

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