Wow Jen loved it! The imagery was just amazing and the words you used to describe everything painted such a nice picture in my mind. It all flowed flawlessly. Well done *5/5*

Woah. This poem contained so much imagery and so many unique, great, words.. that contained a lot of description. I could definatly picture this storm that rolled through very perfectly! Wooot. <33 5/5

Wowsers
this is amazing jen jen
i love how you made the reader imagine the picture
not just read it
very discriptive too
5/5

Jennifer,

a wonderfully beautiful description of a nights storm. Its build up, climax and as your title states, dies.

Your poetry always flows so well that it's almost musical. The words are more than words, they are lyrics, a song about the rising and falling of a night's storm.

Great work.

Michael

Beautiful transtition from day to night to storm and then back to day ... wonderful word choice... the beauty of nature is well captured... imagery is wonderful...

The first two paragraphs are very powerful... I found the third para a little off...
maybe because the syllable is uneven...
overall a beautiful write...

keep writing..