Shut Up & Drive

by Beautiful Chaos   Aug 6, 2008


Drifting cross country
Wind in your hair
Can't turn around
Nothing is there

Thoughts and cold feelings
All left behind
Life keeps on moving
It can't be confined

Happy one moment
Lost in the next
One minute of sanity
An hour perplexed

Without any words
Your mind is at peace
Your soul is at ease
Freedom's release

Crank up the music
Melt into the distance
Get lost forever
Search for existence

The truth that you want
Love that you need
The person you dream of
A hope to succeed

Drive into the sunset
See what could be
It's all out there waiting
Set yourself free

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  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Your poems are so outstanding, and this one especially. The first stanza really drew me in to what you wrote and I enjoyed each and every word..

    "Thoughts and cold feelings
    All left behind
    Life keeps on moving
    It can't be confined"

    Pefectly written, well-expressed....

    "Happy one moment
    Lost in the next
    One minute of sanity
    An hour perplexed"

    I love how you wrote this stanza, and your thought and feelings really pour out into this poem...

    "Drive into the sunset
    See what could be
    It's all out there waiting
    Set yourself free"

    A very touching ending that left me speechless. Good job! Keep writing, always and forever....

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