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by Poet on the Piano
Your poems are so outstanding, and this one especially. The first stanza really drew me in to what you wrote and I enjoyed each and every word.. "Thoughts and cold feelings All left behind Life keeps on moving It can't be confined" Pefectly written, well-expressed.... "Happy one moment Lost in the next One minute of sanity An hour perplexed" I love how you wrote this stanza, and your thought and feelings really pour out into this poem... "Drive into the sunset See what could be It's all out there waiting Set yourself free" A very touching ending that left me speechless. Good job! Keep writing, always and forever....