Comments : Shut Up & Drive

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Your poems are so outstanding, and this one especially. The first stanza really drew me in to what you wrote and I enjoyed each and every word..

    "Thoughts and cold feelings
    All left behind
    Life keeps on moving
    It can't be confined"

    Pefectly written, well-expressed....

    "Happy one moment
    Lost in the next
    One minute of sanity
    An hour perplexed"

    I love how you wrote this stanza, and your thought and feelings really pour out into this poem...

    "Drive into the sunset
    See what could be
    It's all out there waiting
    Set yourself free"

    A very touching ending that left me speechless. Good job! Keep writing, always and forever....