OMG nice

Nicely done there. I could feel your desire. Lol.

Lol this is awesome i love it...

Wow...you really don't sound 15. When I was that age I had my head stuck pretty far up my ass. If you were older and lived near me I'd definitely like to meet you.

Wow lol. now ther's an amazing and unique poem. my eyes hurt cause i wasnt blinking while i read it! good work.

Wowwwwww that was great. very sexual got me all going this morning...

I loved this and I agree with CARiTO. This should be made into a song. it's strong and haunting. Yet it's very true. It's as though you are listening to one's thoughts within their minds.

Excellent job.