Palace of Broken Hearts and Dreams (kyle's poem too)

by CanUKissAwayMyPain   Aug 6, 2008


I sit here in darkness
thinking of you
wishing was all over
pain that I'm going though.

here i am
in this palace of broken heart and dreams
in this dudgeon with this pain inside
left alone and locked inside

i still remember you
Oh so clear in my mind
You broke my heart
with a hammer and a knife.

i see you walk by
full of glamour and shine
are you happy now?
now that you put me aside

Cause I'm locked up
in this palace of broken hearts and dreams
in this dudgeon no one can see
true love deserted me

This poem was from Kyle's and me..
Please rate and comment this poem for the both of us... =)

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  • 16 years ago

    by Yeka

    Awwww love your poem its truly awsome (^_^) 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Seani

    Aw ma ward!!!...a tear leakd owta ma eye man! that is so sad...bt beautifuly writtn!
    5/5
    keep up the excellent work guyz!

    oxox
    ClaireBear

  • 16 years ago

    by HillaryNicole

    So many emotions are let out in this poem crushed,heart broken,loneliness, and deserted

  • 16 years ago

    by AJ Irving

    I like it

  • 16 years ago

    by HvN

    Aww.. sad poem... beautifully written...