Aww Amber, that was so sad and sweet!! gosh, I loved it!! lol ^.^

"
I would be laying there in his
arms staring into his crystal
eyes. Then I'd move in for a kiss
and it felt like we shot a pistol."

Lol favorite stanza ^^^ love how you used pistol for it. lol kinda made me laugh xD

Well, great poem. Loved it. So keep it up Amber!!

5/5 of course!!!!

I'm speechless.... God so good! beautiful.... romantic and catchy!

keep up the good work!

5/5

<3

Dude love this poem ^.^ really wondeful (^_^) keep up the wonderful work (^_^)