Death to my soul

by Tamila Bob   Jun 3, 2004


I could write a song
and have it last forever
and you still wouldn't know
any of the words

i could stand in front of you
and scream in your face
i love you and you still
wouldn't know what it means

you could have my name
tattooed to your forehead
and still wouldn't know
who i am

you could have my dead body
lie in your bed for a week
and just wonder why
is my mattress is so lumpy

just get a C-L-U-E
don't for get comments are always welcome
wuv ya

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  • 20 years ago

    by Tyler

    the first part was great... last part could have been better... but over all i liked it :) keep writing... ill read a few more from u

  • 20 years ago

    by Kevin

    Not bad...not bad at all....bit ropey with the beat of it..but better than most.

  • 20 years ago

    by East Poetry

    you asked me a question in the comment page of my poem my chance, i dont understand the question. please report back to the same place and rephrase your question. thx

  • 20 years ago

    by Tamila Bob

    hi thanks for reading my poem,i love to read your comments thanks lots

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