Aw Bethie this is good. its so sad, but its very good. please PM me or call me if you need to talk ok? I love you chickity

Yeah that's how I felt/feel since watching Jeremy being lowered into the grave. :'(
-x-Broken and Worthless-x-

This was absolutely very dark and the saddest thing I've ever read in my life. I really hope you are okay, and that this isn't for real. This almost brings the reader to tears, cause they can feel the authors sadness so well. :[ Very sad write. 5/5.

Hm that was really heart breaking. the thoughts was realy so touching piece and i love those emotions very well express and great dedication to everyone. very well written keep it up 5/5

I think a lotta people feel this way after someone close to them has overdosed. It was very good and I gave it a 5/5

Beautiful. i love it. so sad and emotional. love it!! ~KM~

Again, very sad. but very good. this poem almost made me cry because a week ago, my friend died of overdose, but this is really good. 5/5. good job!

Great poem!!!!

Wow... the poem is amazing. Such great flow, I love it. It reminds me of my friend Sammy..

Wonderful. Absolutely amazing. I can completely understand the feelings and emotions behind this. The structure was good and the rhyming was great.

"so lower me now into my grave
and tell my loved ones to be brave."

Those were my favorite lines. That was a great ending to your poem. <3
5/5
Keep it up.

-Ally