Aww... i love it..i love the flow... awesome.. =)

With a poem this good, the only thing that i would break is out in tears. this was a really good poem, ur descriptive language and the emotion in the piece was dynamite!

I loved this write because you kept it simple, and wrote it so that so many people can relate to it. a wonderful write indeed. and the title is eye catching. job well done, keep it up!
5/5.

-Ashlei.

I love it(: It has an easy flow and awesome emotion.