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by Curing the Comon Cliche Aug 7, 2008 category : Love, romance / i love you
Rain is crashing faster down Lighting breaks with light Trees are thrown around by the wind The water and fire tonight The rain on the window is deafening It's distorting the TV The power goes out and you jump in my arms This pitch black house, you, and me You run to get the candles I said you'll trip and fall You did exactly that And dropped the candles in the hall Lightning lit up the house again I feel around for you You're trying to light a candle My heart now pounds for you You got it lit and now we glow You want to light some more I say it's kind of provocative But that it's uncomfortable on the floor You say we should light the fireplace And we can watch TV You get up and walk to the sofa And lay down seductively I chuckled and said sure But the TV is not your thought Non-chalantly I light the fire You say it's kinda hot You unzip your jacket And let it fall to the floor You pretend to watch TV I'm left wanting more I sit down next to you And you snuggle up to me And you whisper something in my ear And the heat gets the best of me And in this empty house I was yours and you were mine Watching this blank TV Bodies intertwined Laying there on the sofa You cuddled up to me You kissed me on the lips And I said sweet dreams Blank TV and lightning Rain crashing all around I was yours and you were mine Fire makes a pretty soundI couldn't decide if this was explicit or not. If you think it is leave a comment and I'll move it.
by StandStill
Its a sexy love poem ^^ haha. very true. this was good. visual and story tellingish and yuck. :P there was one stanza where you rhymed you with you. haha. just thought i'd point out all your flaws. ^.^ this was great, jesse. bleh on you 5/5 ((oh, and it's fine in the category it's in..*nods*))