Fire Makes A Pretty Sound

by Curing the Comon Cliche   Aug 7, 2008


Rain is crashing faster down
Lighting breaks with light
Trees are thrown around by the wind
The water and fire tonight

The rain on the window is deafening
It's distorting the TV
The power goes out and you jump in my arms
This pitch black house, you, and me

You run to get the candles
I said you'll trip and fall
You did exactly that
And dropped the candles in the hall

Lightning lit up the house again
I feel around for you
You're trying to light a candle
My heart now pounds for you

You got it lit and now we glow
You want to light some more
I say it's kind of provocative
But that it's uncomfortable on the floor

You say we should light the fireplace
And we can watch TV
You get up and walk to the sofa
And lay down seductively

I chuckled and said sure
But the TV is not your thought
Non-chalantly I light the fire
You say it's kinda hot

You unzip your jacket
And let it fall to the floor
You pretend to watch TV
I'm left wanting more

I sit down next to you
And you snuggle up to me
And you whisper something in my ear
And the heat gets the best of me

And in this empty house
I was yours and you were mine
Watching this blank TV
Bodies intertwined

Laying there on the sofa
You cuddled up to me
You kissed me on the lips
And I said sweet dreams

Blank TV and lightning
Rain crashing all around
I was yours and you were mine
Fire makes a pretty sound

I couldn't decide if this was explicit or not. If you think it is leave a comment and I'll move it.

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  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Its a sexy love poem

    ^^ haha. very true. this was good. visual and story tellingish and yuck. :P

    there was one stanza where you rhymed you with you. haha. just thought i'd point out all your flaws. ^.^

    this was great, jesse.
    bleh on you
    5/5

    ((oh, and it's fine in the category it's in..*nods*))