I'm sitting up at night
With nothing to do
Nothing to think about
Because my world is about you
Your gone in my life
there's nothing I can do
Whatever you felt
I hope it was true
Because the nights when my mind wanders
All the times we had
It brings tears to my eye
That those are all gone and past
And everytime I try to talk to you
Even though I know you won't respond
My tongue gets all tied
Its as if I did somthing wrong
But we both know its you
And we both know its true
That you broke
This once whole and healthy heart
And I wish I could tell you
All this in person
But my mouth can't say the words
And I know you won't listen
So here I am again
Writing something I can't send
Here I am again
Alone in the dark
Keeping this cold and heavy heart
And I wish I could tell you
All this in person
But my mouth can't say the words
And I know you won't listen
*I know how this feels, having strong feelings for someone but not being able to tell them face to face. I think you did a wonderful job with this poem. The style was different and well crafted. You had varied syntax and great diction. Very emotional piece. Keep it up hun. Nik*