Comments : Again

  • 15 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    And I wish I could tell you
    All this in person
    But my mouth can't say the words
    And I know you won't listen

    *I know how this feels, having strong feelings for someone but not being able to tell them face to face. I think you did a wonderful job with this poem. The style was different and well crafted. You had varied syntax and great diction. Very emotional piece. Keep it up hun. Nik*