by SpEcIaLmE Aug 7, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
Every second I spend away from you, |
by Jaimee
Great job. =] |
by girlnextdoor
I can't honestly say that I loved that, the rhythm was off, and the vocabulary didn't draw me in. |
by Judi
This is nice and exactly how I feel about my boyfriend and I am sure he feels the same way for me. It's really beautiful and perfect. |
by HvN
Hey, great poem, I can relate. I'm glad you got back into writing, you're very good :] |
by Nobodys Hero
A very sweet poem! Great job, there are one too many commas but apart from that its a very good piece =] |