Withou You I Am Nothing

by SpEcIaLmE   Aug 7, 2008


Every second I spend away from you,
I miss you more and more,
You are my life, the fire to my soul,
Without you I am nothing.

You seem too good to be true,
The way you are always there when I need someone to talk to,
How you always know what to say to make me smile,
And the way you hold me so I always feel safe.

Your touch is so gentle and yet so strong,
That when you put your arms around me all my troubles disappear,
I never thought I would have you, never thought I deserved you,
But now I have you, I never want to let you go.

I know I can annoy you at times and I can be a winger,
But I love you and you mean everything to me,
I never want to lose you,
Because without you I am nothing.

I wrote this for my boyfriend for 8 months.
Thanks for reading, i haven't written a poem for a while so i would love to know what you think about this, please just vote if you don't want to write a comment, thanks heaps people

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jaimee

    Great job. =]
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by girlnextdoor

    I can't honestly say that I loved that, the rhythm was off, and the vocabulary didn't draw me in.
    There was definatly a simple purity to it though, seeing as love is usually so complicated, and at times hurtful yet your poem showed the innocent side of pure bliss.
    I suppose it's hard to be very original when love is such a worldwide emotion, that everyone seems to want to write about.
    3.5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Judi

    This is nice and exactly how I feel about my boyfriend and I am sure he feels the same way for me. It's really beautiful and perfect.

    Thanks for the great poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by HvN

    Hey, great poem, I can relate. I'm glad you got back into writing, you're very good :]

    keep up the good work!

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    A very sweet poem! Great job, there are one too many commas but apart from that its a very good piece =]
    5/5