Look at Me

by LoveTear   Aug 7, 2008


* Look at me in your moments of despair;
life is not easy life is not fair.

Look at me in your moments of loneliness;
I can bring you peace and I can bring you happiness.

Look at me in your moments of sorrow;
I am your today and I want to be your tomorrow.

Look at me in your moments of joy;
life is also worth to be enjoyed. *

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sora

    That was a wonderful write! very hearfelt and true. i loved it alot. the form was good and the flow was perfect, would be even better if it was longer though. but it's beautiful, job well done. 5/5.

    -AAshlei.

  • 16 years ago

    by Emotionz

    Your poems just keep getting better.. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    Sweet and very rhythmic. Nice to read! Good one!

  • 16 years ago

    by NeverSayForever

    :D 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    Sweetly written sweet lil poem, keep it up....

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