by Heba
OMG,what a wondeful poem.It was really lovely and touching.I can see how much devoted and faithful you are and I am sure he knows your appreciaton and your deep love. |
Short and sweet. |
by MikaMad15
Beautiful! |
by Cooper
An excellent poem ... loved it from the first line to the last. Short and sweet. |
by jamie25
Nice work ! I enjoyed it |
by NoUr
Cute & sweet..lucky he is ;)..keep it up!! |
by A. M.
This is a really cute and simple poem.. like it.. =) Keep writing |
Sweetly written sweet lil poem, keep it up.... |
:D 5/5 |
by Sourav
Sweet and very rhythmic. Nice to read! Good one! |
by Emotionz
Your poems just keep getting better.. 5/5 |
by Sora
That was a wonderful write! very hearfelt and true. i loved it alot. the form was good and the flow was perfect, would be even better if it was longer though. but it's beautiful, job well done. 5/5. |