Comments : Goodbye

  • 16 years ago

    by LadzOfSoul

    The rhyming was great... and your emotions are well expressed...
    great poem, as usual...
    Keep it up...
    so sad, but great poem...

  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    What can i say about this poem:

    geat expression of sad felelings inside
    and i am glade you did not try to hide

    i other i say the most thing in poem i adore
    is rhyming and this is somthing you should work on it some more

    :)

  • 16 years ago

    by HvN

    Aww.... so sad, beautifully written.

    I'll see you soon :}

  • 16 years ago

    by LiveLoveLearnDie

    Lost of deepth in this poem, beautifully writting, you have really expressed your self and im sorry you feel this way, at least you havent bottled it up

    *****