Unfinished love confession

Beauty comes in all forms
You came to me in the form of love
When I open my eyes you were there
I don't know where you came from..
or how long have you been here
But I hope
you can stay a little longer
to hold my hand,
For you've taken my breath away,
You've stolen my heart
And I want you to promise me
if you plan to keep it now
could you
build a home for it
It needs
a lot of love and care
Remember to feed it with kisses, hugs
and pieces of chocolate cake

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This poem is for someone special. Do me a favour and help me edit it. It is very important for me. I will give to him.... Luv, Noor

PS: Thanks for improving suggestion. I am no native English speaker so I appriciate your help. ISHQ. :D