by Brix Ambray Aug 7, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
This love will never fade |
by Love Panda
Although not rhyming i still enjoyed reading this. The structure is unstable but then again so is love and that works out so i think you can get away with it. The words you have chose are excellent, and compliment the poems significance greatly. A lovely read! Well done. |