I love this haiku. Our national bird is swan. I can imagine the scenery...Beautiful swan with long neck swimming in the lake... Reflection on the surface or pond...

Very nice haiku, Michael. :)

This haiku had so much imagery. I could also picture a swan gliding along the lake silenty :] You did a fabulous job... I look forward to more of these observations of yours of nature. Keep it up. 5/5.

Well that sounded perfectly serene and peaceful,and yes natures beauty can bring a tear to the eye.Well done another excellent job

Grant

Beauitfully written with so much vivid imagery. Great work, this was so enjoyable to read. Keep writing, always and forever....

Lovely write with breathtaking description. Just beautiful.

I think you packed a lot of emotion into this little piece, that is why I am such a fan of Haiku, I think you did an excellent job with this one, it was a pleasure to read, keep up the good work.

Great image and flow.

Beautiful job on this Haiku :)
Take Care
Cindy

Awesome imagery...I feel like I see a beautiful image in front me..
Ur description was incredible and ur usage of words really touched me:)
Great job,plz keep it up:)..

Mm yes, good imagery but a little short too , !!
:)