MISSING YOU

by I LOVE AURELIANO   Aug 7, 2008


I CRY AT NIGHT
WISHING YOU WERE HERE
I'D HOLD ON TO YOU WITH ALL MUH MIGHT
AND ALWAYS HAVE YOU NEAR
BUT ITS OVER NOW
AND IT HURTS DEEP INSIDE
AND I DONT KNOW HOW
BUT PART OF MII HAS DIED
I KNOW I TREATED YOU BAD
IT WAS WRONG OF MII I KNOW
AND ALL THOSE TIMES YOU WERE SAD
YOU NEVER LET MII GO
BUT I PUSHED YOU TOO FAR
AND THIS IS WHAT I GET
A BROKEN HEART
AND A MEMORY I CANT FORGET!!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Crazy n luv

    I don't care what the person above me says I loved your poem it was really good!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    This is good, your emotions are well expressed here. Here are some thoughts:

    First, don't put it in all caps, its so hard to read......

    And there are some spelling errors in your poem, so try doing spell check before you submit your poem....

    Overall, you did pretty well with this, just don't do caps and if you can, put punctuation marks in....

    Keep writing, always and forever....

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