This is good, your emotions are well expressed here. Here are some thoughts:

First, don't put it in all caps, its so hard to read......

And there are some spelling errors in your poem, so try doing spell check before you submit your poem....

Overall, you did pretty well with this, just don't do caps and if you can, put punctuation marks in....

Keep writing, always and forever....

I don't care what the person above me says I loved your poem it was really good!!!