LOST IN LOVE

by I LOVE AURELIANO   Aug 7, 2008


I'M LOST IN LOVE WITH YOU
DONT KNOW WHAT I'M TO DO
MY HEART BELONGS TO YOU
IT'S HARD NOT CRYING OVER YOU
I HOPED IT WOULDNT END
BUT IM GLAD THAT WE ARE FRIENDS
SO I JUS WANTED TO SAY
THOUGHT YOU WANTED TO KNOW
THAT I'LL LOVE YOU TODAY
AND FOREVER MORE.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    I like this, very cute...

    First off, no caps, and there are spelling errors in your poem.

    The other thing I noticed that this poem was a little cliche, (but most love poems are!).

    Try making your poems very unique and not using the same rhymes but different ones that aren't used as much.

    Keep writing, always and forever....

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