Thorny limerick

Wrong category...

I think this was a nice surprise Grant. You have a sense of humour. :)

I wonder who is this lady you are talking about? ;)

I'm not sure I understand all of this but your limerick was very good.. You show a lot of versatility seems there is nothing you are not able to do.
Nice one Grant

One was A man From ST LOUIS.
She told him all you have to do is,
Just be yourself, I love what I see.
I'll always be here if ever you need me
He opened his heart and burried treasures did flow
But he soon looked around wondering where did she go?
Now he stands, A tear dripping from his smile
hoping and praying she'll be back in awhile.
Though it takes two halves to make a whole
her vacancy has left a much bigger hole.
Some say good riddence, your absence is blessed
But there are two men who knew her the best
From St Louis To South Africa, Our friendship unfurled
Don't ever forget Sweetie, your loved around the world.
I , for one, Just wish you could see
The burried treasures waiting to flow from me

Funny, have always liked limriks. good write my friend