Comments : Thorny limerick

  • 16 years ago

    by charles

    Funny, have always liked limriks. good write my friend

  • 16 years ago

    by Jim McMillen the man within

    One was A man From ST LOUIS.
    She told him all you have to do is,
    Just be yourself, I love what I see.
    I'll always be here if ever you need me
    He opened his heart and burried treasures did flow
    But he soon looked around wondering where did she go?
    Now he stands, A tear dripping from his smile
    hoping and praying she'll be back in awhile.
    Though it takes two halves to make a whole
    her vacancy has left a much bigger hole.
    Some say good riddence, your absence is blessed
    But there are two men who knew her the best
    From St Louis To South Africa, Our friendship unfurled
    Don't ever forget Sweetie, your loved around the world.
    I , for one, Just wish you could see
    The burried treasures waiting to flow from me

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Rose Blooming

    I'm not sure I understand all of this but your limerick was very good.. You show a lot of versatility seems there is nothing you are not able to do.
    Nice one Grant

  • 16 years ago

    by Goodbye

    I think this was a nice surprise Grant. You have a sense of humour. :)

    I wonder who is this lady you are talking about? ;)

  • 16 years ago

    by Walter Krijthe

    Wrong category...