by SilentSuicide Aug 7, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
The sun sets to black |
by Austin
Interesting. I liked reading it. No spelling errors that I noticed. The last half of the poem was better than the first half, only because of your choice of words. I thought it was kinda cool that you ended with only one line instead of another stanza. That was new. Good job. 5/5 |