Words (Senryu)

Im speechless this poem was amazing

You can take more out of this than what is in your face when you read it. Good job, and thanks for the comment.

..I can see what you ahve done here, confusing the 5,7,5 count for words, when it refers to syllable count.

I like the idea of writing a Senryu on this topic, good effort.

Take care

Michael

Yes verrry agreeed upon from myself.

we do talk a lot, it seems we say too much.

but sometimes words are beautiful, too... like... when you want to tell someone you love them although you never really explain it well, anyway. :)
Great one.

5/5

Yeah, that's what words can do. words can change anything if used properly! loved the description. :)