Comments : Words (Senryu)

  • 16 years ago

    by Aryaan

    Yeah, that's what words can do. words can change anything if used properly! loved the description. :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Mishka

    Yes verrry agreeed upon from myself.

    we do talk a lot, it seems we say too much.

    but sometimes words are beautiful, too... like... when you want to tell someone you love them although you never really explain it well, anyway. :)
    Great one.

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    ..I can see what you ahve done here, confusing the 5,7,5 count for words, when it refers to syllable count.

    I like the idea of writing a Senryu on this topic, good effort.

    Take care

    Michael

  • 16 years ago

    by Katie

    You can take more out of this than what is in your face when you read it. Good job, and thanks for the comment.

  • 16 years ago

    by ForeverASickKid

    Im speechless this poem was amazing