Very nice tribute to all who've served. A good write. 5/5 :-)

All that lays.
A concrete slab.
A name portrayed.
As just another lad.

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Im not sure what got me about this but it immediately pulled me in.
It flows rhythmatically.
5/5

Thank you very much. I wanted to do exactly that. I wanted to make the person who had passed sound worthless and then emphasise how important they actually were. x