by Brittany Harp Aug 7, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
So theres this girl i know who |
by annlee
Hi... mmm.. i understand of what u feel coz i've been there too.... |
This poem is nice, it seems as though u were telling a story which is good...but try to be a BIT more creative with the rhyming...pomes don't have to rhyme anyway but good job =] |