Guilt

by Bloomed Rose   Aug 7, 2008


Dont' give me these mixed messages
I don't want to play your game
Whether you like me or you don't
I'm hooked all the same

I shouldn't like you this way
Guilt's dripping over me
My heart's been exposed
Ripped open for the world to see

It felles all wrong, but yet so right
A taste of bittersweet
I can't help the way I feel
When both our eyes meet

I'm taken and I know you're hers
I can't accept that fact
Whenever you step in the room
I don't know how to act

I'm so helpless and confused
Not knowing what to do
I know one thing that's for sure
And that's that I'm falling for you

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  • 16 years ago

    by KeyxMashingxParody

    5/5 for a good subject matter, and the grammer was pretty good...

    at the end, might i suggest a slight pause instead of putting "And that's that"
    try:
    "And that is...
    I am falling for you."

    see the difference?
    Just a suggestion.
    Thank you for your lovely comment, take care... <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Lost and Delirious

    I know EXACTLY what you mean, I love it, and can relate to it so much right now. good job. 5/5

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