I know EXACTLY what you mean, I love it, and can relate to it so much right now. good job. 5/5

5/5 for a good subject matter, and the grammer was pretty good...

at the end, might i suggest a slight pause instead of putting "And that's that"
try:
"And that is...
I am falling for you."

see the difference?
Just a suggestion.
Thank you for your lovely comment, take care... <3