by Ashleigh Skye Aug 8, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Betrayed |
by Fan Angeleo
This is short but I can feel the hurt and pain. |
Hmm again, interesting style. I can't say much more than that. I think the syllable count though however helps with the poem tremendously. Well done. Just find a title, and you should have another masterpiece. (: 5/5. |