The Hilt of the Sword Comes Crashing Down (Cameo)

by Ashleigh Skye   Aug 8, 2008


Betrayed
again and again,
by a person who doesn't know,
anything
about my life or myself now,
swinging the sword of the past,
I bleed.

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PLEASE COMMENT AND VOTE THANKS A LOT

*Cameo-consists of 7 lines, syllables going 2-5-8-3-8-7-2*

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  • 16 years ago

    by Fan Angeleo

    This is short but I can feel the hurt and pain.

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Hmm again, interesting style. I can't say much more than that. I think the syllable count though however helps with the poem tremendously. Well done. Just find a title, and you should have another masterpiece. (: 5/5.