by HidinVictim Aug 8, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
There's just some words |
by The Queen
It was a bit confusing as you used her i think in the second stanza where you mentioned you broke her bones and then somewhere in the end you mentioned him as a shining knight...It was really confusing although i have a clue of what idea you were trying to portray..However i think this poem was written somehow imaginatively only there were few twists in it..4/5 |
by Fantasy
Very ture. People really dont get sexuality. and it kind of makes me mad, when people judge others due to their sexuality, keep it up 5/5! |