Your breath is still hot against my neck,
As you caress beautiful words into my ear,
Telling me you love me,
And that's all I want to hear,
I can feel your passionate hands,
Dangerously tangled in my hair,
Your lips a scolding fire,
My skin threatening to tear,
Our words a cascade of wanting,
Our movements an adoring tie,
That no matter what happens,
Our love will never die

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all i can say is...
WOW.
The imagery in that.
The desire....
5/5

WOW!..I'm really impressed by your skills Lauren, I loved this poem and love the way that it is written. Definitely 5 stars!...Please keep writing and please keep smiling. :)

I'm not usually one for love poems, but I really like this one. It's pretty freaking awesome great job 5/5. :)

Good god. I was in another world just now.

Nani