U shouldn't have written the whole poem this way.U had to change it a lil bit and u could end it with ur own answers that u really feel inside and that u r sure that he didnt truly love u.. |
Ya i agree with Goth marionette.. ended it with ur answer.. I like it. awesome job. Keep it up =) |
This poem i think should be posted as a sad poem |
by NeverBelieve
Great write! love it. 5/5 |