So theres this guy
That I really like
but he doesnt know how much
we always chat when we can
I am the girl who never gives up
We have these pictures
Hes not a ditcher
But something happened
My friend went out with him
Its sad
And its really bad
Im not glad
Hes really nice
So im going to try
To hold on
And never say goodbye
Try making the poem rhyme...
add some emotions to it as well...
try to make the reader feel with you...
you can make it better...
keep trying :)
keep it up
