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  • 16 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Try making the poem rhyme...
    add some emotions to it as well...
    try to make the reader feel with you...
    you can make it better...
    keep trying :)
    keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by nicole

    Thanksss !

  • 15 years ago

    by nicole

    <3