First of all: Congratulations! Nice collab indeed. *hugs*

You guys must had good time writing this... Every single line is revealing you had a little poetical ecstasy going on... ;)

First stanza was interesting... the expression "My inner beast awakes wanting her completely" was good. :D

Well...the second stanza...was...a wow. I think I entered someone private life section I might not want to enter...I got into Gothic's mind...the area I have not enter before.. ;)

The last two stanzas are nice too, but I have no comments for them.

Once again, congratulations. Bloody good work! :D

Very irotic and grandure. love it with a passion. not cause it is about sex and I'm a guy, but it has a taste of poetry that stays in my mouth wanting more.

Awesome.
im completely in love with it, lol.
xx

Aah wow that has to have been my favorite poem written by you. Never mind by you... EVER!!!! It was truly outstanding, such a marvelous piece that was so beautifully descriptive in such a dark and mysterious way. i loved it!!!! Another unbelievable write. Take Care:)

Excellent and outstanding its really wonderfull keep up the wonderful work (^_^) 5/5

Wow i love this !! great job!! 5/5

Oh how i love vampires i love it wonderful!!!! 5/5

OH MY OH MY!!! That write tastes like a thousand year old fine red wine. Nice Collab. guys...

I am quite impressed.

WOW! this was sum poem here. you guyz make a awesome team. i LOVE vampires so this was even way more awesome! i love the whole poem. it was just amazing. keep it up you 2.

TaKe CaRe,
Frenchy

I'm not sure what to say about this other then brilliantly done. I have read a few collabs but this is one of the absolute best I have ever read.
A truly enjoyable and imaginative read, done with style and grace yet sensual .
Impressive

A Poor poem is when all anger and sad feelings are revealed that turns out funny at the end.