Well Mr Wolf, you can huff and puff and write beautifully. We could all learn from you. I have been here many years and don't have many on my list of favourites..... pencils your name in straight away

Wow, i loved your choice of wording! such a short yet beautiful piece! =]
The flow was perfect and the poem itself wast just so unique, amazing job. Your a very talented writter, I'l have to check out some more of your work ^^

I loved this piece. I loved the flow and it was very beautiful. Actually it wasn't beautiful, it was gorgeous!!! You're a really good writer. This one was definitely amazing.

This poem pleases me very much. It is inspriring and fresh. Definitely charming piece. :)

Clever choice words, it was very enjoyable to read.

Wow this poem is amazing!!
You have so much talent. I love your word choice :]

"Petal and thorn from the same stem born"
These are amazing words. These metaphors really convince us that love and pain both come from one starting point. ~sasha~