by Catherine Sawyer Jun 3, 2004
category :
Life, society /
other
Beauty |
by Sean Allen
Hey, not many great poems on this website are devoted to the beautiful things in life, they are either about people or about sadness. This was a good poem and a good topic. You spelled the world divine wrong, but that is fine, you can edit that out. Sometimes you added commas in your poem where I didn't think they were necessary or appropriate, but that is a stylistical choice. Good job! |